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2024 美國大學自傳寫作
College Essay Writing
🎓 ABOUT 🎓
The Importance of
College Essays
關於美國大學自傳的影響力
Your Personal Statements showcase qualities that none of the following ever can:
在美國大學招生官眼中，以下的學術成果都無法像大學自傳一樣表達出來：
✖︎ SAT or ACT test scores
SAT/ACT成績
✖︎ Grades and GPA
成績與GPA
✖︎ Extracurricular activities
課外活動表現
✖︎ School transcript
學校成績單
and College Essays
are the only part of the application that is fully under your control.
而你的自傳內容，是你申請表上唯一一個你能全權掌控的元素。
🚀 EXPLORE 🚀
The Secret to Writing a Great Personal Statement
探索美國大學自傳寫作課
With admissions rates steadily declining year to year, the application process for top US universities has become increasingly competitive. Now every student boasts impressive grades and activities, making college essays a critical focal point for admissions officers to assess students' qualifications.
申請頂尖美國大學每年越來越激烈，每個學生都擁有漂亮的成績與表現，而大學自傳，成為了招生官審核學生條件的關鍵要點。
What types of essays truly stand out in the eyes of admissions officers?
什麼樣的自傳才能在招生官眼中脫穎而出？
What is the secret ingredient to writing successful personal statements?
寫大學自傳的秘訣是什麼？
“The fact that you have full control over your own representation should be motivation enough to pour your whole heart into the essay.”
🌟 MUST KNOW 🌟
Why this Class
報課前你需要知道的事情
Receive step-by-step guidance on everything from Brainstorming and Outlining to Writing and Revising
美國大學四週課程將以 腦力激盪、文章架構、寫作編修 帶領全方位寫作訓練
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Identify the Best Essay Topics for You
找到最適合自己的自傳主題
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Learn How to Write Creative Nonfiction
學習如何寫出一份完整的自傳
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Apply the Art of Craft and Storytelling
靈活運用文字表達與說故事的藝術
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Find Your Voice and Speak Your Truth
找到你的聲音與你的核心理念
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Remember: this is YOUR JOURNEY - not your parents', not your counselor's, not ChatGPT's, but yours alone.
最後，你一定要記得，寫大學自傳－不是你父母建議，不是你顧問來寫，更不是ChatGPT幫你想
but yours alone.
你的人生，應由你主宰。
🔑 MUST READ 🔑
College Essay Writing Insights
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When faced with applicants of otherwise equal qualifications, colleges use personal statements—which showcase your values, insight, emotional maturity—as a tiebreaker. Your essays will tell admissions officers what matters to you, why they matter to you, and what kind of friend you would be to a fellow classmate.
當招生官看到學術背景與條件相仿的同學，他們會以你自傳中所表達的價值觀、洞察力、成熟度來做出決選。也就是說，你必須好好思考並表達：什麼事物對你來說是最重要的？為什麼重要？你想給你未來的同學當個什麼樣的朋友呢？
💫 Life After High School 💫
MERAKI Alumni Share
Their Story
學姊們的留學成長之路
While getting into a prestigious college is a big achievement, it's what follows that truly shapes our lives.
雖然進入頂尖大學是一項卓越的成就，但真正塑造我們的，是長大後伴隨而來的人生歷練。
Life is full of twists, struggles, heartaches, and moments of pure joy.
生活充滿了曲折、掙扎、心痛、享受那些時刻帶來美好。
Annie and Han-Jiun's post-high school experiences offer a raw glimpse into life's beauty and complexity.
Annie和Han-Jiun寫下了他們上大學後最真實的心境，讓我們一窺成長路程上那無味雜陳的人生故事。
Everyone obsesses over college rankings, and they’re the reason I ended up transferring from UC Irvine to UCLA. After I transferred, however, I realized that I had left something precious behind, something even more important than number rankings, something that I had first discovered when I was at Irvine and would never be able to find again anywhere else even if I started freshman year all over again…
When I decided to major in Cognitive Systems at University of British Columbia, I was baffled by how this intensely multidisciplinary program could encompass seemingly disparate fields from computer science to psychology to linguistics. It was only in my fifth year that I was able to start drawing pathways connecting these nodes which I had thought were wildly different. Like filling in a blank map, I realized that with every experience, good and bad, I was coming to a greater understanding of my mind and my soul—I was charting the atlas of my heart…
🎯 Course Menu 🎯
Summer is Your Head Start
美國大學自傳寫作課表
Rising G12 students in summer 2024 are eligible for registration
適合2024 暑假升G12學生報名
2 sessions / each session = 4 weeks = 8 classes in total
暑期共兩梯 / 每梯為期四週 / 8堂課
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